Bank of America Student Leaders Essays

Hey, I'm applying to the BofA summer program this year, and I really want to get in. I would like feedback on my essays. Is anyone (preferably past student leaders) willing to read my essay (potentially for free, but I can pay at most $10)? I was going to have someone I saw on TikTok do it, but she wanted $45, which I don't have. If you’re able to help or know someone who might be interested, I would be incredibly grateful! Thank you so much for considering it!